Chapter 1 has had a final edit! Going through it with a fine tooth comb and perfecting all the grammar sentence by sentence. It would not have happened if it wasn’t for your feedback, especially the criticism. Most people probably wouldn’t say it but you have my utmost gratitude, in the end you have helped me create a much better piece that more people are going to enjoy, maybe some of you who had difficulty with it originally will find it more pleasing to read.
I also adjusted some of the scenes and information based off the feedback too. As tempting as it was to completely change some of the scenarios and events of causality leading up to where the story is to date, but I could not bring myself to edit a plot I have already written. Although I will do my best to reinforce events and provide reasons and scenarios you find more realistic! (Bear in mind this is a fictional world and does not operate the exact same as our on)
As for our novel! A final edit on chapter 1 is just the beginning, I plan on doing it for every chapter, all of volume 1 tomorrow hopefully! Speaking of which I have done most of the cover design for!
It was really sad that nobody would help me with the artwork, it got really tough at some points and I ended up starting my original design by myself. It’s safe to say my illustration artwork is so sub par I would be embarrassed to put it up for sale.
SO! I stuck to what I am good at, symbols and doing the best I possibly can with them! I have included a picture of it so far so you can visually see what the novel will look like. Simple I know, but it is neat.
First is going to be the sale of E-books, going on the iTunes store first and then it will go to paperback, and lastly kindle.
On another note, all your support has continued to be amazing. I’ve been mentioned on bato.to, and reddit twice so far. As more people have become aware of my novel the traffic coming to the site has been phenomenal, we seem to be making new records every day. Truly, the only thing I can say is, Thank you.