Chapter 16 – In Search of ‘The Mysterious Boy

Editors: Vincent, weakwithwords
Authors notes:So finally chapter 16 is done! Surprisingly enough I managed to write… I think it was about 70% in the past five days. And this is through my work and other distractions. Anyway, now it is time for me to go find some food at the local supermarket. After I eat, I will be going back to change chapter 15 to present tense and hopefully finish planning out chapter 17 today as well! I also plan on updating as many of my sites pages as well. If there are any questions you want to add to the FAQ and ‘Info about inside the game.’ Please leave a comment on that page and I should be able to get around to it today!
As with the new chapter, please to take a moment of your time and show your support by following the link to vote for End Online at TopWebFiction. Remember, your vote will only last a week, but I will only ask you to do so with each full chapter release. More motivation for me to write faster! Also, this is weakwithwords’s first day on the job, so make sure to give him a warm welcome!
Anyway, that is all from me. So, for now… To Avalon -( O.o)/
Editors Notes:…


As soon as I complete my quest, my world fills with shock. I worked so hard to do a good deed for another person. Yet the reward was not only worthless, it was detrimental.

+5 Infamy

I read that one point over and over again. At the same time, I notice everyone else’s faces darken. I have no doubts in my mind that they are feeling exactly the same as I am.

With the new quest that he offers me, however, another piece of my heart seems to blacken. Not only can I not refuse the quest, but it may potentially end with another negative reward if I am not careful.

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The Accidental Post

Next chapter completion: 100% (Now in editing – It is currently 3:22am in my time zone so I am off to bed! Have a good night everyone! I got it all written tonight so chapter should hopefully be released for you by 2:00am GMT)
We’re up to four accidental posts so far. I hate my life! Anyway, all you email readers can thank Naeko for this one ^.^

Well, I have done it again. Accidentally posting what is written for the next chapter by accident before it is done.

So, I figure I will show you exactly how I manage to do this. Below I have attached a screen shot of a new post being made. Which will now turn into the one for the next chapter.

You will see how when replying to a comment, the ‘send’ button is very… Missable. While the ‘Publish’ button is conveniently located in a position where most comment threads have their ‘send’ or ‘post comment’ button. I am sure you can now understand how I make this silly mistake.

To date, this is the second time I have done this. ^.^

Edit, it won’t let me upload the image without messing around with it. So here is the link to the image.

Chapter 15 – Chain Quest

Edit: The chapter is now edited to my usual style. I hope I got it all and moved it into into present tense where required. Funny that about half of it was already written in my usual style despite me trying to do it differently. I guess, once I built my writing style it kind of became a part of me.
Author’s Notes: Finally. We are finally here. Chapter 15 is now out. Also, considering my workload has exponentially increased recently and along with my house moving my schedule has been destroyed. So, until we can get a new working schedule in place, I will post a next chapter completion percentage at the top of the most recent chapter and update it whenever I get the chance to do more writing!
Lastly, another thing that only takes a moment of your time. I only ask this on full chapter releases, but please do vote for end online at TopWebFiction. The votes that are cast only last for 7 days so they are in need of some renewing,
Editor’s Notes: … ^ He writes too much…


I logged off after we decided to meet back in three hours. Well, it is three hours until we can start the quest once the in game sun rises.

Lifting my VL off of my head, the low evening sun floods my room with a golden light. The window is at the perfect position, allowing the entire room to be evenly filled with the gentle glow.

The first thought that came to my mind is about Lost. The second is that today happens to be Valentine’s day.

Rolling over and stuffing my face into the pillow, my face becomes conflicted. I waited so long for him to arrive in Grenton. I had grown more and more anxious with every passing day hoping he would arrive before today.

Why? Because I want to ask him to be my Valentine for the day.

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